"Jason takes Ronville" had the same problem, or am I wrong?
Alas, you are right it has some problems indeed, caused by a writings block, but I shall overcome this, and try to finish this game.
PS: I also work on another episode.(In case of the other one has too many problems.)
Title: No title...yet.
Lead Characters: Dave and the young Robert Miller.
Story: One day Dave's father is shot in an underground parking garage of the mall. While he fights for his life in hospital he returns to a horrific case which in the past he had to solve. Meanwhile in the present Dave tries to discover who has shot his father.
Script: 5%
Plot: 10%
Music: 0%
Graphics: 2%
Finished: Unknown.